EfScience 162 Class Blog, (Fall 2003 - Fall 2004)

This blog is for my ESP, English for Science 162 students, at Kuwait University, to post their online writing assignments. I, the class instructor, will be posting comments to help my students improve their writing skills.

Thursday, July 15, 2004

Kholoud's Essay:"Traffic Congestion in Kuwait"

Traffic congestion in kuwait

Traffic congestion is famous problem in most country in the world; such as Kuwait.The government try to reduce this problem by many ways.One of these ways is receive any suggestion from people that help to solve this problem.
One of the beneficial suggestion is building a subway system that can be boost business in Kuwait.First, this kind of transportation can connect different parts in the country, which would increase conunication between companies. Also, a subway system can attract tourists to visit Kuwait.Tourists can move between the different parts in Kuwait in less time and spending less money.
Moreover, good way to reduce traffic congestion buses service in kuwait.Buses service would become basic source of constant income for the country.
In conclusion, can not only solve the problem of traffic in Kuwait it can also boost the economy and reduce environmental pollution in the country.The government should seriesly considerd the solution as soon as possible.



7 Comments:

  • At 1:32 AM, Blogger hala_1 said…

    hi kholod
    your essay writing has good suggestions. but,please pay attention to grammer mistakes and try to reduce them.you can also give more supporting points and ideas .thanks for your working hard

     
  • At 10:26 AM, Blogger heba said…

    hi Reem
    i think you are not good in conclusion ,sentences & words , grammar and spelling . but you have agood idea and you should improve your selve on them to support your idea
    thanks

     
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