EfScience 162 Class Blog, (Fall 2003 - Fall 2004)

This blog is for my ESP, English for Science 162 students, at Kuwait University, to post their online writing assignments. I, the class instructor, will be posting comments to help my students improve their writing skills.

Thursday, July 15, 2004

Hala's Essay on "Traffic Congestion in Kuwait"

Traffic congestion
Traffic congestion is a serious problem which faces
different countries in this century after these great car
inventions. Kuwait is one of these countries which are suffering
from this problem nowadays. Many people are complained of traffic
congestion and they try to avoid this hard problem. This paper is
focused on how can the government solve this problem and cover it.

One of these suggestions is improving bus service.
Using companies and schools buses service to transfer their workers
and students is a beneficial way to solve this problem. First, it
reduces the expenses on buying expensive cars. So, the country could
use this money in building huge enterprises. Also, oil consuming
will be decreased and especially that Kuwait is a country which
exports petroleum to foreign countries. Therefore, this saved
petroleum can boost the economy of the country by exporting it.
Finally, the arrival of employees to their job at appointed time
would be fulfilled by improving this kind of services. So, the
business and the work will be developed.

On the other hand, differentiating between working
hours in the working places could be another effecintial suggestion
to encounter the traffic congestion in Kuwait. First, it might
remarkably decrease the transportation in the street. the less
number of cars could save time when everybody can reach to his point
without consuming time. Furthermore, the pollution will be reduced.
Therefore, healthy environment would be created with healthful
plants and animals which are eaten by man. Finally, the traffic
accidents would be reduced and that would have positive effects on
society by less number of traffic accident's victims.

To conclude, improving buses service and differentiating
the working hours between ministries and schools could cover the
solution for traffic congestion. These suggestions would improve the
economy of our country and boom it without spending a lot of money.
These solutions should be considered seriously by the government as
soon as possible.



1 Comments:

  • At 5:56 PM, Blogger Buthaina al-Othman said…

    Hala: Your essay is quite interesting and I have enjoyed reading it. However, I've noticed few irrelevant sentences, in addition to some grammatical and spelling errors and mistakes.

    Please note that I have corrected and uploaded your essay to our EfS 162 Onlinewriting Yahoo Group.

    Good job, Hala, keep it up!

    EfS Instructor: Buthaina al-Othman

     

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