EfScience 162 Class Blog, (Fall 2003 - Fall 2004)

This blog is for my ESP, English for Science 162 students, at Kuwait University, to post their online writing assignments. I, the class instructor, will be posting comments to help my students improve their writing skills.

Saturday, July 10, 2004

This Week-5 Assignment: "Essay Writing & Peer Review"

During the previous assignment you have all posted to this 162 Writing Blog your suggestions on ways to reduce the problem of traffic congestion in Kuwait.

This week-5, you are to choose two (2) of your suggestions posted to this blog, earlier, to write a 4-paragraph essay. Please, read the following:

Pretend that you are to convince a government committee to seriously consider your suggestions. To do this, you have to explain the advantages of your suggestions. For example, if one of your suggestions was to build a sub-way, you have to explain the benifits of having a sub-way. You have to present the advantages a sub-way would have if it were built.

You need to provide three (3) benifits to support each suggestion.
Remember that the 4 paragraphs should include an introduction paragraph, 2 body paragraphs, and a conclusion paragraph.

Looking forward to read your essays, girls.

Thank you, in advance, for your cooperation and hard work.
EfS 162/53 Instructor: Buthaina al-Othman
 
To do a Review, Use  Peer Review Form for Evaluating Writing
Note: Please remember that to post your review or recommendations to your peers, you need to click on (Comments) below each essay you are assigned to review. 
 

11 Comments:

  • At 1:47 PM, Blogger blondy said…

    Traffic congestion
    one of the main problem in this century in different countries is traffic congestion.Kuwait is one of these countries which is encounter this problem recently.many people are traying to reduce this big problem and they are still complaines on traffic congestion.this paper is focused on how can the goverment seriously consider this problem.

    one of the efficient suggestions is differentiating between working hours and schools.First,it could decreases the crowded transportation in all street.less cars save time soevery body can reach his point in the same time.Also it reduce the number of accident cars and reduce environmental pollution.therfore,would be healthy people and environment.

    On the other hand,using buses service to transfer students to school and workers is a beneficial way of this problem.First,decreases the oil consuming.so,it can boost the economy of kuwait which exporting oil.Furthermore it save money on buying expensive victims.So it booming kuwait economy.Finally,the worker go to their job in its time.So,business would develope.

    To conclude,differrentiating between working hours and schools and improving buses srvice can not only solve the problem of traffic in kuwait it can also boost,the economy and reduce environmental pollution in the country.The goverment should seriously cnsider these solutions as soon as possible.

     
  • At 4:07 PM, Blogger reem said…

    Traffic Congestion

    Traffic congestion in Kuwait was not as high as now days.Walking and using bicycles could be a solution for this problem.So,my paper will talk about walking and bicycles in details as a solution of traffic congestion.


    Walking can solve the traffic congestion in many ways.First,it will reduce the numders of cars,which will lead us to a healthy environment.Second,people who walking daily feel well.Heart trebles,diabeties,blood pressure and other diseases will disappear from our society.Also walking is the easiest way to save your money that you expend in fixing a car.


    Bicycles also help us in our problem.In medically way,it moves your muscles.Bicycles are not depending on gasoline,which affect the atmosphere.And of course it is cheeper than cars.


    As you can see,walking and bicycles benefit our society in different sides.Both of them save your money and keep you healthy in the same time.In addtion,let us breathe a pure air.The goverment should seriously consider it as a solution.

     
  • At 4:12 PM, Blogger reem said…

    Traffic Congestion

    Traffic congestion in Kuwait was not as high as now days.Walking and using bicycles could be a solution for this problem.So,my paper will talk about walking and bicycles in details as a solution of traffic congestion.


    Walking can solve the traffic congestion in many ways.First,it will reduce the numders of cars,which will lead us to a healthy environment.Second,people who walking daily feel well.Heart trebles,diabeties,blood pressure and other diseases will disappear from our society.Also walking is the easiest way to save your money that you expend in fixing a car.


    Bicycles also help us in our problem.In medically way,it moves your muscles.Bicycles are not depending on gasoline,which affect the atmosphere.And of course it is cheeper than cars.


    As you can see,walking and bicycles benefit our society in different sides.Both of them save your money and keep you healthy in the same time.In addtion,let us breathe a pure air.The goverment should seriously consider it as a solution.

     
  • At 4:16 PM, Blogger reem said…

    Traffic Congestion

    Traffic congestion in Kuwait was not as high as now days.Walking and using bicycles could be a solution for this problem.So,my paper will talk about walking and bicycles in details as a solution of traffic congestion.


    Walking can solve the traffic congestion in many ways.First,it will reduce the numders of cars,which will lead us to a healthy environment.Second,people who walking daily feel well.Heart trebles,diabeties,blood pressure and other diseases will disappear from our society.Also walking is the easiest way to save your money that you expend in fixing a car.


    Bicycles also help us in our problem.In medically way,it moves your muscles.Bicycles are not depending on gasoline,which affect the atmosphere.And of course it is cheeper than cars.


    As you can see,walking and bicycles benefit our society in different sides.Both of them save your money and keep you healthy in the same time.In addtion,let us breathe a pure air.The goverment should seriously consider it as a solution.

     
  • At 10:49 PM, Blogger hala_1 said…

    Traffic congestion
    Traffic congestion is a serious problem which faces
    different countries in this century after these great car
    inventions. Kuwait is one of these countries which are suffering
    from this problem nowadays. Many people are complained of traffic
    congestion and they try to avoid this hard problem. This paper is
    focused on how can the government solve this problem and cover it.

    One of these suggestions is improving bus service.
    Using companies and schools buses service to transfer their workers
    and students is a beneficial way to solve this problem. First, it
    reduces the expenses on buying expensive cars. So, the country could
    use this money in building huge enterprises. Also, oil consuming
    will be decreased and especially that Kuwait is a country which
    exports petroleum to foreign countries. Therefore, this saved
    petroleum can boost the economy of the country by exporting it.
    Finally, the arrival of employees to their job at appointed time
    would be fulfilled by improving this kind of services. So, the
    business and the work will be developed.

    On the other hand, differentiating between working
    hours in the working places could be another effecintial suggestion
    to encounter the traffic congestion in Kuwait. First, it might
    remarkably decrease the transportation in the street. the less
    number of cars could save time when everybody can reach to his point
    without consuming time. Furthermore, the pollution will be reduced.
    Therefore, healthy environment would be created with healthful
    plants and animals which are eaten by man. Finally, the traffic
    accidents would be reduced and that would have positive effects on
    society by less number of traffic accident's victims.

    To conclude, improving buses service and differentiating
    the working hours between ministries and schools could cover the
    solution for traffic congestion. These suggestions would improve the
    economy of our country and boom it without spending a lot of money.
    These solutions should be considered seriously by the government as
    soon as possible.

     
  • At 1:29 AM, Blogger kholoud hadi said…

    Traffic congestion in kuwait

    Traffic congestion is famous problem in most country in the world; such as Kuwait.The government try to reduce this problem by many ways.One of these ways is receive any suggestion from people that help to solve this problem.
    One of the beneficial suggestion is building a subway system that can be boost business in Kuwait.First, this kind of transportation can connect different parts in the country, which would increase conunication between companies. Also, a subway system can attract tourists to visit Kuwait.Tourists can move between the different parts in Kuwait in less time and spending less money.
    Moreover, good way to reduce traffic congestion buses service in kuwait.Buses service would become basic source of constant income for the country.
    In conclusion, can not only solve the problem of traffic in Kuwait it can also boost the economy and reduce environmental pollution in the country.The government should seriesly considerd the solution as soon as possible.

     
  • At 2:38 AM, Blogger amna_alkanderi said…

    Traffic Congestion


    Traffic congestion is one of the most important problems we are facing in our contemporary time in Kuwait. There are several ideas to reduce such a problem. We suggest that schools and ministries begin their day at 8:00 am while universities begin at 9:00 am . Also increasing the number of bridges can also solve this problem.
    This paper is focused on the two suggestions above.

    The first efficient suggestion is let employees in the schools and ministries begin their day in a different time than universities. First, such a decision can reduce the number of cars in the streets in a certain time so people can reach their places quicly and easily. Also it can reduces the number of accidents that might happen because people will not drive in high speed to avoid the time in which cars begin to congest. In addition it will save people money by saving cars petrol because cars congestion consume its petrol with out any good things.
    Another good idea is to increase the use of bridges. First using bridges in stead of some traffic which waste people time also let the emargency to reach their place quicly and easily with out stoping in the red traffic light. Finally it is reduces as we said the cars accidents because teenagers or crazy drivers will not challenge the red traffic and pass it.

    As you can see starting peoples day at different times and building more brides do not only solve the problem of traffic in Kuwait but also save people life, time and money. The government should seriously consider these solutions as soon as possible.


    Thanks.

     
  • At 2:56 AM, Blogger Shaymaa said…

    How to reduce the traffic congestion


    Traffic congestion is a problem which needs a really solution here in Kuwait. There are many things the government can do to provide it like use another kind of transportation, for example metros and trains. This paper is focused on the two suggestions above.
    One of the efficient suggestions is building a train station. First, it can decrease using cars and help people to go any where faster. Also, it can attract tourist to visit Kuwait and move between the different parts in the country in less time spending less money. As a result, it can increase the economic of the country and this is what the government looking to.
    Another good way to reduce traffic congestion is to improve metros service in Kuwait. First, if it is happen and be in all areas, it could be easily to people to move in group, so it can also decrease another ways of transportation. More than that, this decrease in use different kind of transportation can save another problem which is pollution. Finally, we can live in healthy country with healthy weather.
    As you can see, trains station and metros service can solve the problem of traffic in Kuwait, boost the economy and reduce environmental pollution in the country. This solution would also let people be happy about the results and freely move to any where in any time. The government should seriously consider this solution as soon as possible.

     
  • At 11:51 PM, Blogger atharee said…

    Traffic congestion in Kuwait

    Car use is wide spread in every modern country in the world when it was first invented and was first sold to the public. Unfortunately, because of the increase of world population and the amount of car use in the countries which causes a lot of traffic congestions problems in the countries. One of these countries that are facing these problems is Kuwait. The big amount of cars that is being used in Kuwait are increasing rapidly with the increase of its population through out the years not to mention the lack of services of other transportation which boost up the rate of traffic congestions in the country, therefore produces serious environmental problems and economy loses in Kuwait, so to reduce these drawbacks on traffic congestions the government should consider applying these suggestions to the public. One of these suggestions is to encourage people to drive one vehicle for one family trip rather than using two or more vehicles and to use masal power transportation like ridding a bike or taking a walk for shorter trips. This paper is focused on the two suggestions , above.

    One of the beneficial suggestions that could reduce traffic congestion is to encourge the puplic in kuwait to drive at least one vehicle for one family on long trips. first, this way helps families move in kuwait with less expanses on trips. Also, it could boost up the income of the country by decrasing the number of accidance and pollutions.

    Another good way to reduce traffic congestion is using masal power transportations like ridding a bike or walking. First, this way helps the puplic to move in short trips in the country with less time and less money. Therefore, lets people do exercise in the process. In addition, it lowers the pollution and accident rates in the country.

    In conclusion by driving on one vehicle for one family and using masal power transportation these suggestions not only solve the problem of traffic congestion in kuwait it can also boost up the income and reduce enviroment pollution in the country the government should seriously consider these solutions for the benefits of the country.

     
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